I didn't picture you for such a great writer. Normally I would give constructive criticism and point out things I didn't like, but I did like all of it.
Write more!
A man sat upon a fish.
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I like it, but request an explosion somewhere in it.
fo sho
Wow you got a lot in your mind, you got some good writing skills. You actually got me to read something : P
Geez, you SHOULD get more comments than me.
haha so true. but you're a girl and that makes you infinitely cooler by internet standards.
fetusdoctor
I like the first verse, not too fond of the other two.
JackPhantasm
dammit I knew it.