Short and sweet.
I made a song using my voice as a synth back in 04 or something. This loop brings back those memories. Thanks man.
That said, the voice-synth really gives away the loop :P
It may be a dead end.
But that's all the world is, its your choice whether you can see over the end of the road. To the next path. Or some other cliche metaphor.
I really love how this is repetitive yet not, like really good. I don't doubt you should indeed ditch the AP and go into RL musical things. Hope so, you're fucking good. I my only complaint is you could of put some traveling effects on it, but I know thats not your style.
First voice acting song I could bare to listen to.
Good sense of the mic space as well.
There are things in the sand and they scare me.
I really love how this song almost collapses and doesn't over and over again. Just like sand.
Its really like, I'm trying to run up a dune, and I can't, and now I'm on my back dying.
My only complaint is that you pretty much just have a sand narrative going, where is the sand? Am I in a desert? Or on a beach? I suppose nothing suggests that I'm just in a box getting filled with sand, like that guy from the Jungle Book. Which is awesome. But i need to hear MORE FEAR.
Tis why you got a 9 sir, not enough fear.
ARound 3:15 your stuff's good but you shimmy about rythym wise a little bit.
Just a bit. Slow down and then catchup or something.
Maybe it's supposed to be like that. But, if it isn't. Use metronome moar.
This song begs to be let out in a glorious 10 minute electronic symphony.
Too professional for newgrounds. Love how the lower bass is barely there, but still there. Like it's breathing in my ear.
Make the melody have subtle changes thoughout it's looping structure. Don't make it just a loop.
imo. but it's fine the way it is, too.
Thanks for the awesome review, JackPhantasm! I don't know about a 10 minute electronic symphony, but it will sure as hell be in the 3 - 5 minute range. Too professional for NG? nothing is too good for NG. Well, in conclusion, thanks for the awesome review!
I felt like I was on a fox-hunt in the old country, on horseback.
If you made it more erratic and then when it followed through more blindingly flow-like. It'd be better. But for now work on othe rshit.
Trip Rating: 8/10
best soft riff I've heard in a while, I'm serious. It's almost epic when you're in the zone.
Trip rating: Ten out of fucking ten
Thanks, Cleopatra :)
Alrightalrightalright my g.
Next time yo.
Like, find another topic, that's just as ranc, as the dicks and shit.
What the fuck am I saying.
You don't even talk to me.
Right nice job. Do something different next time. Don't be going IWP on yo fans.
To be honest I'm REALLY surprised this has gotten this many hits. It's not bad though. Good job.
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