JackPhantasm's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[The Ballad of CrippleKane]

Great Music Video

wish you would've done your own audio, the song really takes away and makes it silly.

Top notch pacing though, it DID match the song. i just wish you would've made this to match itself, not the audio. It became a visualization of the song, instead of the song just acting as a backdrop and mood. (as many movies did)

They also did what I said you just did though. So I guess it's all great!

A musical scene from a vintage western. That's what I got. Good job.

AlmightyHans responds:

yeah i wish i had access to a 30 piece orchestra too man, but you know, I'm no hollywood producer.

[The CC is Still Alive]

That

was the gayest thing I've ever seen.

KKyuubi responds:

Thank you, if I see a vote of 10, I could define this as the "happiset" thing you've ever seen.

[Castle III part C]

Well Done Sir

Everything thats been mentioned before, two times over. I'll admit, at times the alpha gradients on some of the fades were a little close to overbearing, they seemed to work, in the end.

The sound though, at the beginning is too loud, I think that was mentioned. Yeah. And uhm, the voice in some parts don't have enough atmosphere int he sound itself, ie you can tell where the mic starts. I know this is mainly do to shitty mics, but you can mask it pretty well if you put the right ambience around it, or fade into it with the mic sound. Have your voice actors record a period of them not saying anything before they start to speak, however long you think the fade should be.

Awesome job.

I WONDER WHAT HAPPENS IN THE FOURTH ONE

-fiend guy

Get-lost responds:

Shouldn't be impossible to fix no. Thanks fiendguy

[Dranking Helmet]

Thy Lord

I bow before you, they mighty _altr_, for you are the god of all gods. Your breath smells of hopps, and your fart of salty roses, I kiss thee in my mortal head, and pray for your blessing.

Your wurk was divine.

altr responds:

YOU'RE STILL OUT OF THE BAND, but saw the screenie, <69 ...

[cool_penguin_0 oldskool]

Top Notch

Even better than Nickelodeon, I was on the edge of my seat the whole time. Everything was dashing and perfect like a virgin tied down but not shakin. I especially liked how you portrayed the shadows and the buildings, it reminded me of moulan rouge.

cool-penguin-0 responds:

I'm glad you luffed it.
<3

[Our Lives - "Take One"]

Not half bad.

BlahBlaHa- The figure could be drawn better, nice idea with him painting where he is on the globe, like a little control panel for the world. You manipulate people in your life easily?

Dawg3220- Nice, some things could be smoother (I know it's intentional but I could tell that some weren't, at least...I think). New Jersey's better than New York?

Flux- Rain falls a big straighter than that. And knees move. You play guitar? Nice... ("the sun?" haha, sentimental things unknown to me might make it a fitting name though, so meh.) Just work on the rain and the walking, more fluid pick motion. And you will have a winner. The song went real nice with the mood though, nice job.

J_Smooth- Unshaded buildings should probably use perspective to help get a sense of 3Dism (hey, that's a word). Nice walking, and motions by the people. I could see a white line through the loop of trees when the car was rolling though. Fix that next time? You read to your little brother? Deduction- Motions by the people are close to perfect, they are sketchy but the physics are real, which is more important. Good work.

PoopMoos3- You spent more time on the animation than the background. Ahe, should've probably made the crowd move individually and not as one. I take it you didn't spend a lot of time on that? Heh, nice job anyways, for the effort.

All of you- It was more good than not good, which is..ahe, good. Keep up the coolness.

Sinsearlee,
JackPhantasm

J-Smooth responds:

Thanks for breaking it down by author :)

For that comment about reading to my little brother... The movie is called Where I see Myself In The Future, which then means that Im reading to my son. Lol its all good though, the group gives thanks for the 8!

[cellphones and cars]

Ahe

My bad. I my computer totally lied to me.

Funny that movie was.

hamandcheeseclock responds:

Thanks