JackPhantasm's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

["Chickens"]

HAHA

Are you Sherbert? Ahe, you did use my idea. That's hilarious, because I was like, "Uhm, do a chicken crossing the road." Great job man, you could have drawn the ground better...that's about it.

-JackPhantasm

[Black Ops: Virus]

Hmm

You need to work on making everything good. There were some parts that weren't well done..at all. Like the guard walking, and when the agent was hiding in the shadows, it just looked like his head was floating there. (make a siloette of his bod that fades away or soemthing?) Keep improving.

[NG Deathmatch 2]

Oh no

What happened!

YOu like...slacked off. Bad Knox. BAAAAAD.

Try really hard next time. Like, pretend you're fucking a really really really hot girl, and if you fuck up, you will become a social outcast! That's outcast. So yeah...still funny though. Sorta.

[The Perfect Murder]

Ack

The end screen is out of perspective or something, and the gun looks wierd (in the end screen), it's really annoying, cuz the rest is all nice and slick. Make it "perfect" next time, even the end screen. K?

[The Books Rage]

Good

Please, I know you can, so make EVERY part of your animation smooth. This could have been twice as good physics/motions wise. And you know it. If you can animate the head turning, please, please spend as much time on everything else. I know you are capable. Good job anyways.

[Over the Rainbow]

Not bad

One word- Make the sticks closer to the camera angle...thanks.

Yes...that's one word biasniatch.

-Crimson

[Foamy: Eye Stigmata]

Better

It's good to know that you CAN do lip sync. Keep improving.

[Our Lives - "Take One"]

Not half bad.

BlahBlaHa- The figure could be drawn better, nice idea with him painting where he is on the globe, like a little control panel for the world. You manipulate people in your life easily?

Dawg3220- Nice, some things could be smoother (I know it's intentional but I could tell that some weren't, at least...I think). New Jersey's better than New York?

Flux- Rain falls a big straighter than that. And knees move. You play guitar? Nice... ("the sun?" haha, sentimental things unknown to me might make it a fitting name though, so meh.) Just work on the rain and the walking, more fluid pick motion. And you will have a winner. The song went real nice with the mood though, nice job.

J_Smooth- Unshaded buildings should probably use perspective to help get a sense of 3Dism (hey, that's a word). Nice walking, and motions by the people. I could see a white line through the loop of trees when the car was rolling though. Fix that next time? You read to your little brother? Deduction- Motions by the people are close to perfect, they are sketchy but the physics are real, which is more important. Good work.

PoopMoos3- You spent more time on the animation than the background. Ahe, should've probably made the crowd move individually and not as one. I take it you didn't spend a lot of time on that? Heh, nice job anyways, for the effort.

All of you- It was more good than not good, which is..ahe, good. Keep up the coolness.

Sinsearlee,
JackPhantasm

J-Smooth responds:

Thanks for breaking it down by author :)

For that comment about reading to my little brother... The movie is called Where I see Myself In The Future, which then means that Im reading to my son. Lol its all good though, the group gives thanks for the 8!

[Yzarc Falls]

Not bad

There are parts you could make better, the feet were a little sketchy, but that didn't stop it from being one of the better animations that I've seen.

I'd be willing to voice act..I guess, nothing better to do really.

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[Stick Stick Stick!]

Ha

Good job, but you should have done 3, since they come in sets of three on the TV. (whoa that rhymed) :)

The only thing that I could think of is..uh, I don't know...just should have made it 3 instead of one, that's it, good job man.