JackPhantasm's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

["Chickens"]

HAHA

Are you Sherbert? Ahe, you did use my idea. That's hilarious, because I was like, "Uhm, do a chicken crossing the road." Great job man, you could have drawn the ground better...that's about it.

-JackPhantasm

[Black Ops: Virus]

Hmm

You need to work on making everything good. There were some parts that weren't well done..at all. Like the guard walking, and when the agent was hiding in the shadows, it just looked like his head was floating there. (make a siloette of his bod that fades away or soemthing?) Keep improving.

[NG Deathmatch 2]

Oh no

What happened!

YOu like...slacked off. Bad Knox. BAAAAAD.

Try really hard next time. Like, pretend you're fucking a really really really hot girl, and if you fuck up, you will become a social outcast! That's outcast. So yeah...still funny though. Sorta.

[The Perfect Murder]

Ack

The end screen is out of perspective or something, and the gun looks wierd (in the end screen), it's really annoying, cuz the rest is all nice and slick. Make it "perfect" next time, even the end screen. K?

[The Books Rage]

Good

Please, I know you can, so make EVERY part of your animation smooth. This could have been twice as good physics/motions wise. And you know it. If you can animate the head turning, please, please spend as much time on everything else. I know you are capable. Good job anyways.

[Over the Rainbow]

Not bad

One word- Make the sticks closer to the camera angle...thanks.

Yes...that's one word biasniatch.

-Crimson

[Yzarc Falls]

Not bad

There are parts you could make better, the feet were a little sketchy, but that didn't stop it from being one of the better animations that I've seen.

I'd be willing to voice act..I guess, nothing better to do really.

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[Stick Stick Stick!]

Ha

Good job, but you should have done 3, since they come in sets of three on the TV. (whoa that rhymed) :)

The only thing that I could think of is..uh, I don't know...just should have made it 3 instead of one, that's it, good job man.